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Some backgound!
I've been asked this a few times, so i thought I'd do a little intro.
This is all my own work, nothing copied or pasted here. It's my idea
regarding how the four survivors, Bill, Zoey, Francis and Louis met,
and their attempt to find safety. It's ongoing work, around a chapter
every day or two (mostly dependant when I have a good idea!), so keep
tuned! The chapter links above take you to the direct chapter, with a
link to the next one at the end if you're reading from the start.
Enjoy! 
Chapter 1- The Second Survivor
The room was dark, lit only by a lone bulb hanging by a wire from the
ceiling. Two doors provided access in and out of the room, and both
were barricaded shut with filing cabinets, their once important
contents spilling out all over the floor. The room's furnishing was
scant- a couple of chairs, a table with a wonky leg, a basic
medi-cabinet and a variety of non-working appliances that were at one
point used on a regular basis in this room, once part of a thriving
office. If you had managed to gain access to the room, you probably
wouldn't have noticed the lone figure sitting in a darkened corner,
cigarette slowly smouldering in the corner of his mouth. If one angled
the light for a better view, one could have mistaken the figure for
someone's grandfather- if grandfathers wore shabby army uniforms,
equipped themselves with pistols and assault rifles and were trained in
the use of deadly firearms, that is. Lieutenant Colonel
William Taylor sat silently, watching the door that led to the outside
world, or 'the insanity' as he preferred to call it. Years in 'nam had
made him a patient man, used to regulated procedures. His day folowed
the same routine- awake, equip, enter the insanity. Top priority-
survive. Secondary priorities- look for supplies, look for survivors,
look for help. Lower priorities- eliminate any wretched soul under the
grip of the infection. Return to safety. Barracade up. Sleep. that was
it. For a week now Bill had carried out this procedure, and every day
no survivivors and no help had been found. As much as Bill wanted to
push out of the city, he was bound by supplies, safety and company;
without one, there'd be no chance of survival. So, the routine. Over
and over, for as long as it took to find someone. If ever.
Bill sighed deeply. He'd seen some terrible and astounding things in
his life, but nothing could have prepared him for this. Once the
infection reached the mainland states, it spread with a ferosity not
even he could have envisagened. Within a week chaos ruled, the healthy
running around like headless chickens. Some like Bill kept their heads
and holed up until the initial chaos ended- there was nothing an old
war vetran could do to cure a viral infection. Sitting back, Bill
remembered the first days, when no fortress had been found, when he was
vulnerable. They weren't pleasant to say the lea... A distant noise
suddenly caught the old soldier's attention. It wasn't a low moan or a
rasping gasp of an infected, but neither was it background noise, of
which the retired Lieutenant Colonel's ears had grown accustomed to. It
was breathing.. short breaths... panicked. Bill frowned, getting up
slowly, checking his old timepiece- it was approaching half past 8 in
the evening, the time when the darkness was almost absolute. By now the
sound was growing louder; it was definetly human, but then so too were
the infected... but rapid, shallow breathing? He'd never heard that
before. Shoving aside the cabinets, Bill kept his sences sharp and
reached for his assult rifle. Switching on his flashlight, he slowly
opened the door, quickly checking from side to side, gun ready.
Swinging the light around slowly, Bill heard footsteps. Quick
footsteps, heading his way. "Stop right where you are and
speak." Bill ordered sharply, gun pointed in the general direction of
the noise. The footsteps stopped instantly, but no noise aside from
breathing came forth. "I said speak!" Bill snapped, "Or I'll put you out of your infected misery!" "P..please..
d..do..don't sh..sh..shoot..." came a voice, trembling terribly.
Feminine... Not infected. Not that it mattered, as Bill knew he was
clearly immune. But still... he didn't fancy his face attacked by a mad
infected he had let in by mistake "Ok, I'm not going to shoot. Just
come to the light, but don't enter yet." Bill held up the flashlight a
little higher, and saw a slim figure approach the torch. It was indeed
a girl, no older than early 20's, clad in jeans and pink sweatshirt,
hair tied back in a loose ponytail. She was clutching a pistol, though
Bill guessed she'd never fired it; firing guns at people was something
that looked easy, but when made to do it.. well, that was a whole new
kettle of fish. The girl reached the door, still panting, shaking all
over. Bill raised a hand slowly to her forehead, checking for elevated
temperature. Normal. Lowering his gun, Bill ushured the girl in,
bolting the door behind them. "Thank you..." muttered the girl, sitting down and clutching her legs, huddling up as Bill piled up the cabinets again. "So,
what's your name? And what the hell are you doing running around in the
dark with only a pistol to your name?" Bill asked quietly, grunting as
he heaved the cabinets back into position. "I... I'm Zoey.. Z..Zoey
Weatherbee. I'd been holed up over by the supermarket on Blackett Hill.
I found this thing in the security office..." Zoey muttered, pointing
to the pistol. "I haven't used it yet... they're still... they're still
human... When they broke through I escaped through a small window in
the bathroom. I just paniced, I didn't know what to do. It was dark,
their rasps, their screams... I.. I..." Bill turned to see the girl's
face collapse into her hands, sobbing. Sighing, he drew up a chair and
put an arm round her. "You're safe now. My name's Bill, I used to
be in the US army, I know how to keep people safe. A lot of crazy shit
has been going down recently, and we need to keep our heads, or we'll
be as bad as them..." he muttered, sparing a brief look at the door.
"Get some sleep, use my sleeping bag, it's in the corner. I've slept in
worse places than this chair" he chuckled softly, "we can sort stuff
out proper in the morning." Zoey nodded, looking up, bleary eyed. "Thanks
Bill..." she muttered again, getting up and into the sleeping bag,
collapsing straight to sleep. Bill slumped back into his chair, closing
his eyes. "First survivor saved. Let's just hope she's not the last..." he muttered quietly, drifting off to sleep. to Chapter 2
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Chapter 2- The Man of The Hour"So you had supplies back at Blackett supermarket?" It was mid-morning. Zoey had just woken up to find Bill checking over his rifle, ensuring it wouldn't jam at an inopportune moment. It felt strange, not being outside at this hour. His regime had been broken up, and he was in a hurry to get back on track. "Well good morning to you too!" Zoey yawned, stretching out. "B..b..blackett supermarket? You're not going there to get supplies there, are you? It's overrun, you could never do it, even if you were in the army! You were in the army, right?" she enquired, though Bill's military uniform and medals spoke for themselves. "Sure was kiddo. I know how to handle these things. They're dumb. We find a bottleneck, keep alert, we could take on an army of these things. Yes, we!" Bill muttered, hearing Zoey's squeal of protest, "I need someone to cover my back. And if things get a little out of hand- which they won't- I have one of these." Bill pulled out a tubular device coated in lights from his pocket- "A pipebomb. Crude, but I've seen one of these babies in action. Very handy. Now, I want you out, armed and ready in ten minutes. There's food over in the cupboard, toilet is in the sideroom there. OK, make that 15 minutes..." Bill chuckled, looking at a bleary eyed Zoey as she collapsed back onto the pillow. 20 minutes later Zoey left the building, closing the door tightly behind her to find Bill crouched down, gun raised, finger on trigger, surveying the area around them. It was a mess. Opposite them was an abandoned petrol station, seperated from Bill's stronghold by a stretch of main road, cars littered, abandoned by their infected owners. Corpses of the diseased littered the ground. "Three rules..." Bill muttered, "One. Stay together. Two. Stay sharp. Three... well, leave three to me. You just tell me if you spot anything I haven't." Zoey nodded, following cautiously on after the battle worn soldier. Bill remained focused as ever, sweeping every new area and corner for the infected. He'd cleared out most areas, but you could never be too careful... As the pair approached Blackett Drive, Bill's attention sharpened even further- he'd yet to clear this area, and it was unfamiliar territory. As they creept throught the street Bill checked every doorway and alley, occasionally firing off a few rounds into the slumped forms of the lethargic infected, causing Zoey to jump with each burst. To most people, Blackett Drive would be a nightmare- creeping shadows, the eerie breeze... the threat of the infected... But Bill was not most people. Years of fighting had dulled his fear, and Blackett Drive would not spook him. Striving on, the unlikely pair soon reached the carpark of Qwick-Buy. It was almost empty. Bill frowned, looking around for another way to the supermarket- wide open spaces were both a blessing and a curse. They afforded a good view of incoming infected, but if they were mobbed... they would be mobbed from all angled. Still... there was the pipebomb... "Stay close kid.." Bill muttered, motioning towards the supermarket. The two slowly made their way foreward, Bill keeping his eyes up front, Zoey nervously keeping the rear. "Another 90 yards.. 80... 70.." Bill muttered, thinking quietly to himself. Suddenly his train of thought was shattered by a scuffle, a pirecing scream, the sound of gunfire, a shrill car alarm- and a distant cry. Bill whipped down round in an instant to see Zoey, pale faced, pistol smoking, held in her shaking hands. In the distance, a stray dog ran off. Closer to them was a car, a dull pink sedan, bleeping noising, informing its long gone owner it was being threatened. It was also informing every infected person from the supermarket. "Shit, shit, SHIT!" cursed Bill, pulling Zoey over to a nearby landrover and huddling behind it whilst pulling out his pipebomb. "I'm sorry, I'm sorry!" cried Zoey, pistol still gripped firmly in hand, "the dog, it just.." "Apologies later, get under the car!" Bill yelled, standing to look at the supermarket and the horde rushing out from it. It was a sight to behold. Suited buisnessmen, supermarket check out assistants, several policemen, the horde was full of people wearing ordinary clothes but far from ordinary looks- pale clammy skin, wide glazed over eyes, and signs of fury painted over all of their deadened faces. Throwing the bomb, Bill ducked and rolled under the car. The horde kept coming. An explosion rocked the carpark, but still they came. It took Bill a second to work out what happened. The whistle. It must have broken- and without the whistle, the bomb was next to useless against a horde. Without it, the horde took no notice. Without it, they were finished. The frenzied mass reached the car, banging on the sides. Zoey was in hysterics, screaming and gasping, and along with the cries of the infected all around them, Bill's military mind was unable to come up with an escape plan- soon they'd push the car over, and that would be it. He'd go out fighting, the way he always wanted to go out. But Zoey? Bill pulled out his pistol, removing the safety, deciding to end the terror quickly. Before he could do anything more though, the group moved away, running towards another source of noise. Bill risked a peek up, seeing the infected run towards a single point- and getting mown down in less than 10 seconds. Bill started to struggle up, catching his coat on a loose part. As he struggled to free himself, a person came over, unhooking it for him, chuckling. "Well well well old timer. Looks like I saved your ass just in time..." to Chapter 3
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Chapter 3- Rumors, revelations and rifle shots
Bill staggered to his feet, blinking
up at the stranger. He was stocky, no lightweight, with tattoos running
down his arms. Bill frowned- he'd never much cared for tattoos, or
people who stained their skin with ink- but hell, this guy had saved
them and he wasn't about to comment about the man's body art. As the
old man got his bearing again, the stranger was trying to coax Zoey out
from under the car, with minor success.
"Come on darlin', I ain't gonna bite... Come on, that's it, they're all gone now.."
Slowly but surely Zoey made her way out, pale as a sheet and shaking
like a leaf. Bill didn't blame her. Setting her into the back of the
vehicle, he turned to face their resucer. He was wearing a sleeveless
leather jacket, a muddy white shit and a pair of jeans so dirty it was
difficult to determine their original colour. He held out his hand.
"Name's Francis, Francis Klipper. What about your name, grandad?"
Bill raised his eyebrows, but didn't comment.
"William Taylor, ex-army... this is Zoey Weatherbee, she was stumbling
around outside last night. We were looking for supplies when they
came..." Bill muttered, looking over at the supermarket.
"Ex-army eh? Nice gun... stole mine from some store, five fingered
discount, you know what I mean?" Francis laughed, holding up his
shotgun. "Auto shottie, always wanted one of these babies... Still
pissed about my bike though, had to ditch it, motorways were full to
burstin'. Been heading towards a military outpost north of here, fuck
knows if it's still there or not. Better than waiting around to die
though, eh?"
"Guess so. I've been holed up for a few weeks now. Didn't want to dare
risk it. Now that there's three of us... If you're coming with... we
might be able to escape this crock of horse-shit" Bill shrugged,
looking over to Francis and then Zoey, regaining some of her colour now.
"Hell, the more the merrier!" Francis laughed, causing Zoey to jump.
"Sorry sweetie, didn't mean to scare ya! Come on, let's move..."
"Hey hey, let's get back to shelter first. We can discuss plans first."
"Plans? Come on grandpa, we gotta move! Spent my whole life on the
move, I ain't gonna stop when we've still got hours of daylight left!"
"You listen hear you young.."
"What's that?" Zoey whispered, head turned away from the squabbling pair.
Francis turned, cursing, pulling both Zoey and Bill down, putting a finger to his lips.
"I've only heard rumors of these... things." Francis whispered. "They
creep in the shadows. Used to be human. The virus... it did weird shit
to them. They ain't human anymore. Seen scrawls on the wall. They stalk
you, creep you the fuck out. Then..." Francis slid a finger across his
throat, "I call 'em hunters..." Bill raisied his head a fraction,
chancing a glimpse. It wasn't pretty.
The hunter, as Francis put it, was skulking round a car, bent on all
fours. It was wearing a jacket of some sorts, coupled with a hood.
Infected fashion... Bill thought humourlessly. The creature turned a
little, looking over at the direction of the car, and it waiting, still
crouched. Waiting.
"Please.. let's just run!" Zoey choked, huddled up right againt the door.
"No.. It'll attack.." croaked Francis, mouth dry. "It's waiting.. I'm sure..."
"Oh shit, shit, shit... It's getting closer!" rasped Bill, looking under the car and seeing the growling creature approach.
Both men reached for their weapons, palms sweaty. Zoey gripped her pistol as if it would kill her should she drop it.
*CRACK*
A piercing gunshot ripped through the air.
The creature was dead.
To be continued...
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So you decided to write Zoey as a stereotypical female, weak
and afraid? Good character depth, real original.
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Quote: Originally Posted by Jäger ZeroSo you decided to write Zoey as a stereotypical female, weak
and afraid? Good character depth, real original. I go for realism. As much as I'd like her to be a gun toting weapon firing scary bitch, she's a college girl from a rich family. No weapons experience, no history of bad shit happening to her. She isn't suddenly going to become Miss. Killer Queen overnight. Hey, maybe you'd take to a post-apocalyptic like a fish to water, but I know I fit Zoey's description very well; I'd be shitting my pants every time I was almost swamped and killed by a mad ravenous zombie horde. Maybe the general populace has balls of steel....
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Most people don't have balls of steel? So mine aren't the norm!?
Really good though, I want L4D to actually have an official storyline, a bit of explanation as to how all the zombies appeared etc.
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Quote: Originally Posted by NumenorQuote: Originally Posted by Jäger ZeroSo you decided to write Zoey as a stereotypical female, weak
and afraid? Good character depth, real original. I go for realism. As much as I'd like her to be a gun toting weapon firing scary bitch, she's a college girl from a rich family. No weapons experience, no history of bad shit happening to her. She isn't suddenly going to become Miss. Killer Queen overnight. Hey, maybe you'd take to a post-apocalyptic like a fish to water, but I know I fit Zoey's description very well; I'd be shitting my pants every time I was almost swamped and killed by a mad ravenous zombie horde. Maybe the general populace has balls of steel.... I'd honestly have to agree..even it seems a bit of a sterotype, It is alot more realistic then "Badass action girl" off the get go. It would be unrealistic if she stayed like it, which we all know does not happen. People naturally have "Fight or Flight" survival programing, and what I saw was she trying to find safety from the unfamiler threat. As she grows more familer, through Bill and Francis example, she'd grow more experinced, and who says she does not learn a few tricks from Bill on firearms. Anywho, a really good story you have going..yet really overall it seems that Valve just presents the charaters and the scence, and lets it's players draw their concultions on how they met, and your just presenting your story how you thought the four most unlucky people in the world came together.
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