demo need for review

http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=e861390da151ba9ed2db6fb9a8902bda

Plez review this demo cold, boc, phoenix or whoever reeviewed last time I think I have improved a lot from the past but still need advices and help I hope soup sees this too but...he probably won't anway just nee you guys to take a look at it plez

1:40 - You should have checked for a sentry there. If you had you may have been able to destroy it and save some health. You kill it later but a chunk of time is left.

2:40 - You probably shouldn't have taken on that demoman. He had a medic and you got killed because of this fight.

3:24 - You could've taken this sentry out without strafing. There was no one to stop you from standing still and lobbing them through a sweet spot. You try to do this at 3:40 but a soldier knocked you into the sentry.

4:00 - Again, don't rush it. You saw a chance to take down the sentry but didn't put the stickies close enough. You could've shot an extra one and it would've gone down. Your team had to waste an ubercharge to take it down in the end.

5:50 - You saw a sentry being built on C. You may have been able to destroy it before it became a problem. Luckily your team got it and you guys won.
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7:20 You kept trying to sticky jump on top of A. You wasted a medkit and you weren't at full health at round start.

10:08 - Not a good idea to use pipes to hit the soldier on top of B. Stickies would've worked better. You died and were unable to help your team save B.

12:00 - Stauff sacrificed himself to save you, and you honestly ran back around the corner where you knew a soldier and heavy were at red health? You should've resupplied.

12:50 - Bad idea following the soldier in. You could have slowly locked him in with stickies and detonated them all at once. Instead you died.

Was this the game when I was going CRAZYYY?

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That narrows things down, for sure.

As a soldier!

Wait, what do I have to do with this?

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You guys all have the same avatar that confuses me...there are 3 people in the forum that uses that avatar and overall how was it cold?

When you set a trap, put a couple stickies in different places so if they aren't caught by the blast right by the door they will still get caught in a different one.

 You don't need to charge your stickies every time you come around a corner/out of spawn, and if you want to, remember to aim at the enemies' feet.

Try not to get in close with soldiers or heavys hoping to get some lucky pipes, either stay back or whip out your bottle if you don't think you can kill/hit them.

chup being nice to me? thats good for a change . And yeah I was phoenix